See What I found?
A tiny wooden chair
Old, twisted, dirty, rough and curly
Found it near the fire circle in the grass
Do fairies us it as a chair?
I adore gathering words and
questions with children – and adding thoughts onto luggage labels is something
that I (and many others) love…
I often use luggage labels
in projects for children (and me!) to add thoughts, questions, words and
phrases to objects and places…
Today in the Discovery
Garden at Dunkirk year 4 worked with me and we created a set of poems for tiny
objects we found – and we made a little Garden museum of treasures…
I love simple poetry formats
that follow a set of “rules” but then take on a million different meanings when
created by a group of people… There’s something so inspiring and wonderful
about a group of poems all made following the same pattern - but each poem has
its own beauty, inspirations, quirks and ignites its own questions.
I’ve used lots of different
poetry patterns in projects and today we used one of my favourites – this was
suggested by Juliet at Creative Star Learning in a really lovely blog post about outdoor poetry http://creativestarlearning.co.uk/ . I’ve used it with adults and children (in
schools and when I’ve run INSET sessions) and it produces results that are
really captivating.
I’ve just been sorting
through the photos I took of the children’s words in the garden – and have been
smiling lots of their ideas – a million stories are suggested here I think (and
a brilliant image in my head of a bug doing push-ups with a stone…)
See What I found?
A broken white jug
Broken, smooth, hard, bendy
and white
I found it in the mud
Is this a piece of a jug and
how did it get there?
See what I found?
A flower
Beautiful, green, pink and
colourful
I found it on the floor
I wonder if it’s been an
animals habitat?
See What I found
An interesting rock
Smooth, rough, bumpy,
multi-coloured small rock
I found it next to some dirt
It might have come from
space?
See what I found?
Two sticks to peel
Old, big, small, rusty
I found it on some bricks
I wonder that you can make
something out of it?
See what I found?
A hard stone
Strong, does not break
I found it in the fire
circle
I think a bug uses it to get
muscles…
There are many more…
The poetry form is as
follows (I’ve also changed it to “did you hear what I heard?” and other things in a similar vein…)
First line: See what I found
Second line: say what the
object is
Third line: four or five
descriptive words about it
Forth line: say where you
found it
Fifth line: a question about
it
And the poems will flood
in….
With very many thanks to Juliet at Creative Star
Learning for the format and her wonderful blog posts…
We were also really pleased
with the wonderful crop of strawberries we were able to pick and eat there and
then today! The Discovery Garden is nurturing
us well!
Thanks Claire for a lovely blog post. I can't remember where I first stumbled across this structure. I think as a student I found a set of notes about teaching poetry called "Not daffodils again" and it was one of the formats offered there which I always remembered.
ReplyDeleteAlec Finlay's website is great for poetry structures if a little hard to navigate. He uses a lot of luggage tags too!
What a lovely post.
ReplyDeleteI've recently moved abroad and no longer work in childcare, i deeply miss the Reggio Emilia approach so it's lovely to be able to see it through your writing x